tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post8737888746576721787..comments2008-07-17T16:21:29.313-04:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissa2626@gmail.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-44883722689738052152008-07-17T16:21:00.000-04:002008-07-17T16:21:00.000-04:002008-07-17T16:21:00.000-04:00This sends the visual senses into overdrive. Wonderful imagery. Thank you for entering this into my Poetry Prompt.Pen Me A Poemwww.penmeapoem.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-62819831600278977822008-07-17T13:58:00.000-04:002008-07-17T13:58:00.000-04:002008-07-17T13:58:00.000-04:00I love the line, "million locked spaces of night splits open". I will reflect on this line for the rest of the afternoon.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputatednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-64821468529869369592008-07-15T14:11:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:11:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:11:00.000-04:00Excellent work!Noah the Greathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-87442703150534025012008-07-15T14:05:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:05:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:05:00.000-04:00Lissa, this is an excellent response for the Tuesday Title. I absolutely love the third and final lines of your poem. I think everyone visits a black place sometime in their life but, I like to think its their personal strength that carries them back out safely that matters most. Then they can reflect on what they've learned. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.Michelle Johnsonhttp://poefusion.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com