tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post6545086412867047691..comments2008-01-05T16:44:16.714-05:00Comments on just writing words: Gonelissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissawrite@gmail.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-3622959845719382542008-01-05T16:44:00.000-05:002008-01-05T16:44:00.000-05:002008-01-05T16:44:00.000-05:00Not an easy read. Quite disturbing in fact. Having...Not an easy read. Quite disturbing in fact. Having said that it's a wonderful piece and I congratulate you in managing to draw out your readers emotions with your words.keith hillmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-16985157883638481052008-01-04T22:22:00.000-05:002008-01-04T22:22:00.000-05:002008-01-04T22:22:00.000-05:00Dark - really dark ... made more so by the fact th...Dark - really dark ... made more so by the fact that the regret appears not to dig right to his core, to his soul, like I thought it would. A detatchment that only the bottle can bring I guess.<BR/><BR/>A sombrely and well written character. Your diversity of characters is applaudable!Jodi Cleghornhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00808676742258881407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-1617620075842433312008-01-04T19:17:00.000-05:002008-01-04T19:17:00.000-05:002008-01-04T19:17:00.000-05:00Very stirring and emotional. Thanks for sharing i...Very stirring and emotional. Thanks for sharing in this Fiction Fridaynotfrommarsmaleinsights.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-88845165469585905772008-01-04T16:21:00.000-05:002008-01-04T16:21:00.000-05:002008-01-04T16:21:00.000-05:00Wow, difficult and sad. Interesting take on the t...Wow, difficult and sad. Interesting take on the theme for today--a broken resolution that has been restarted because of the tragedy that breaking it created. The bitter ending of "for now" takes your breath away.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-67449662363247346232008-01-04T15:47:00.000-05:002008-01-04T15:47:00.000-05:002008-01-04T15:47:00.000-05:00Pretty dark lissa - but I've known someone like yo...Pretty dark lissa - but I've known someone like your character. I like the bitter ending of "for now".Paulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06776918959979397311noreply@blogger.com