tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post5431092325279364153..comments2009-01-05T22:19:33.206-05:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11012085842881252635lissawrites@gmail.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-87413294487840591642009-01-05T22:19:33.206-05:002009-01-05T22:19:33.206-05:00Haunting, ghostly<BR/>Your writing flows well and is very descriptive. Strong beginning leads to an unusual ending.gelhttp://shadowsinthemoonlight.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-48494037262621187882009-01-05T21:46:18.502-05:002009-01-05T21:46:18.502-05:00Lovely, lovely, lovely. So much of your writing has an ethereal feel to it. Your imagery really is wonderful - 'dazed sky..'<BR/>This is one of my favourites!Selmahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07506693626605514457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-40400508104778523112009-01-05T03:42:47.130-05:002009-01-05T03:42:47.130-05:00I’m a fan of Edith Piaf – so I immediately responded to the title. There was a lot of pain and abuse in Edith’s life too. ‘Life in Pink’ – I like the idea of a theme of ‘quiet optimism/hope/carrying on’ running through the story in spite of the hard-hitting event that unfolds. <BR/><BR/>You’ve written some beautifully woven sentences and images in such a tragic/difficult tale:<BR/>“The sky poured winter tears as he was being lowered down into the deep earth.”<BR/>“Night has quietly drifted by, lacing the city in an overcast trance.”<BR/>“Her lips curved into a crescent moon.”CathMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.com