tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post4089800899998523067..comments2008-07-02T12:19:42.828-04:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissawrite@gmail.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-65820035323026090272008-07-02T12:19:00.000-04:002008-07-02T12:19:00.000-04:002008-07-02T12:19:00.000-04:00it is as if you caught so perfectly a person's thoughts in turmoil... there in the stairwell with each step... yellow polka dot memories.. it is almost too real... and thaz good lissa... great story in response to the prompt...OneMoreBelieverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-91340347211041980562008-06-27T21:40:00.000-04:002008-06-27T21:40:00.000-04:002008-06-27T21:40:00.000-04:00alzheimer's comes to mind when i read this, lissa. i agree with merrie, this has the beginnings of a short story or novel. keep up the beautiful work you're doing. have a nice weekend.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-38073973608735386192008-06-27T21:21:00.000-04:002008-06-27T21:21:00.000-04:002008-06-27T21:21:00.000-04:00Great post that offers mystery, emotion and drama!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-16643382262482109322008-06-27T20:14:00.000-04:002008-06-27T20:14:00.000-04:002008-06-27T20:14:00.000-04:00wow. only five mins? this is powerful prose. love the ending.lissahttp://flyturtlefly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-59634974952803270262008-06-27T14:37:00.000-04:002008-06-27T14:37:00.000-04:002008-06-27T14:37:00.000-04:00Lissa,<BR/>Absolutely beautiful!<BR/><BR/>It's incredible what you were able to write in 5 minutes. I'm amazed. Really. Lush imagery, beautiful word choices.<BR/><BR/>This is a great beginning to a short story or a novel.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing!!<BR/>Blessings,<BR/>MerrieMerrie Destefanohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04447209247265513676noreply@blogger.com