tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post1253970157011180211..comments2008-01-15T13:15:37.112-05:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissawrite@gmail.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-62854627517976598872008-01-15T13:15:00.000-05:002008-01-15T13:15:00.000-05:002008-01-15T13:15:00.000-05:00This is a seriously good poem. The first stanza leads through the images to the final thought, a coherent string of truly poetic observations and turns of phrase. I would not be one bit disappointed in the voters if your poem won the contest. It would be deserving.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-18429976643385270402008-01-15T13:05:00.000-05:002008-01-15T13:05:00.000-05:002008-01-15T13:05:00.000-05:00I really love this. You never cease to amaze me with your talent.Yolandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10135944573305009556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-83057806071634481432008-01-13T04:35:00.000-05:002008-01-13T04:35:00.000-05:002008-01-13T04:35:00.000-05:00I like it. Lovely and lyrical.Sarawww.poetswhoblog.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-31428085120627354002008-01-12T21:18:00.000-05:002008-01-12T21:18:00.000-05:002008-01-12T21:18:00.000-05:00What a wonderfully descriptive piece. Wonderful.<BR/><BR/>Than kyou so much for dropping in on my story. Your comments are very appreciated.keith hillmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-34616128385667153002008-01-12T13:26:00.000-05:002008-01-12T13:26:00.000-05:002008-01-12T13:26:00.000-05:00Lovely.<BR/><BR/>I just voted for you. :-)Jennhttp://www.mixedmetaphor.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-63353867565182251442008-01-07T15:43:00.000-05:002008-01-07T15:43:00.000-05:002008-01-07T15:43:00.000-05:00I particularly like the sound and message in the second entry.susanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-40848465247584734222008-01-04T17:57:00.000-05:002008-01-04T17:57:00.000-05:002008-01-04T17:57:00.000-05:00those are beautiful...LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-37319550086539092492008-01-04T00:07:00.000-05:002008-01-04T00:07:00.000-05:002008-01-04T00:07:00.000-05:00Very well done...one haiku feeding off of the other. I love haiku done this way.<BR/><BR/>SSandyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06824251377079898081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-56831669518641607452008-01-01T19:59:00.000-05:002008-01-01T19:59:00.000-05:002008-01-01T19:59:00.000-05:00i love "winter's frosted air...shattered but not broken..."<BR/><BR/>it gives word to my love/hate relationship with this season of beauty (but i like the warm, i can't help it)<BR/><BR/>happy new year!!qualcosa di bellohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-42300619031090216012008-01-01T12:01:00.000-05:002008-01-01T12:01:00.000-05:002008-01-01T12:01:00.000-05:00what a lovely string of haikus... it carries a meassage as a whole,, or can be seen in a singular light... i particularly enjoyed the last one... <BR/><BR/>metamorphic state<BR/>life's fragile smile upon us<BR/>hope here at world's endpaisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-30950162799410237572007-12-31T10:08:00.000-05:002007-12-31T10:08:00.000-05:002007-12-31T10:08:00.000-05:00hey Lissa !<BR/><BR/>This is marvelous- and quite the picture of Maine these days!<BR/><BR/>Thank you also for your comments- I love them all, and please don't hesitate. Sure, I love to give gifts! My musings were about other kinds of gifts.<BR/><BR/>Happy New Year!!<BR/>~abrahamspeculatorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02726065482584166028noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-77549127353681285172007-12-31T01:45:00.000-05:002007-12-31T01:45:00.000-05:002007-12-31T01:45:00.000-05:00Happy new year!<BR/>I love your series, in particular the sun rays spinning on the naked sky.spacedlawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-9395043524825096352007-12-31T01:27:00.000-05:002007-12-31T01:27:00.000-05:002007-12-31T01:27:00.000-05:00Oh, these are wonderful! Wonderful. born on winter's end, spinning in the naked sky, life's fragile smile - each one better than the one before. Wonderful!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-15675765701858266332007-12-30T22:46:00.000-05:002007-12-30T22:46:00.000-05:002007-12-30T22:46:00.000-05:00Well done, Lissa! God bless.<BR/><A HREF="http://slcpoems.blogspot.com/2007/12/one-deep-breath-frost.html" REL="nofollow">Writing in Faith</A>Sandy Carlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-23897735297701339522007-12-30T22:37:00.000-05:002007-12-30T22:37:00.000-05:002007-12-30T22:37:00.000-05:00wow, lissa! great haikus!the laughing gypsyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06788959524529079463noreply@blogger.com