tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post1133191931103317088..comments2008-07-24T06:17:22.385-04:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissawrites@gmail.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-86644596691151052512008-07-24T06:17:00.000-04:002008-07-24T06:17:00.000-04:00i love the musicality of this. the tone and feeling really captured me.lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03004702260976878505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-58569354318338143932008-07-24T02:29:00.000-04:002008-07-24T02:29:00.000-04:00A unique and beautiful way to express the prompt.J.C. Montgomeryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05681137099755243041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-89004614004580084212008-07-23T21:27:00.000-04:002008-07-23T21:27:00.000-04:00i could see this one lissa,, very well done!!1paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-36039089501183906432008-07-23T13:12:00.000-04:002008-07-23T13:12:00.000-04:00Just reading a few entries made me get out my notebook and pen.<BR/>You are an inspiration.Franceshttp://blogjem.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-48053820068861412552008-07-23T03:32:00.000-04:002008-07-23T03:32:00.000-04:00Cool stuff so far from what I've read. Keep it up.Adrianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02443115203326308921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-80546374255885711532008-07-22T18:53:00.000-04:002008-07-22T18:53:00.000-04:00I like how you used the dullness of color to evoke a dullness of feeling. You extended the image all the way to the last line.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-68552992441540770942008-07-22T15:32:00.000-04:002008-07-22T15:32:00.000-04:00I like this. Interesting use of today's title.<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-10551520020896812022008-07-22T11:31:00.000-04:002008-07-22T11:31:00.000-04:00I wish I could take the boy by his hand and hum with him as he pushes the last rays of sunlight away. You've created such a beautiful image with this title. Nice job. Have a nice day.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-14088820428339355102008-07-22T10:25:00.000-04:002008-07-22T10:25:00.000-04:00I really like how you have used the title! Good work.Noah the Greathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.com