tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post1003767882822729871..comments2008-05-06T11:28:28.157-04:00lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570lissa2626@gmail.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-70522681586485414762008-05-06T11:28:00.000-04:002008-05-06T11:28:00.000-04:002008-05-06T11:28:00.000-04:00I really like what you did with this prompt! It's beautiful.<BR/><BR/>I'm glad you're going to do the Message in a Bottle meme again, I'm sure you'll write something beautiful.Karinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05399849455270704359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-33139406581014905542008-05-02T15:43:00.000-04:002008-05-02T15:43:00.000-04:002008-05-02T15:43:00.000-04:00the quiet intimate thoughts reflect beautifully of emily's poem... tho it definitely stands on its own.. luv the last stanze.. an empty cup i will savior did it for me...one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/category/poefusion/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-43733554355309736972008-05-01T22:22:00.000-04:002008-05-01T22:22:00.000-04:002008-05-01T22:22:00.000-04:00oh, this is a beautiful write.Angelicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07561622934124649565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-57334819494396991972008-04-30T22:19:00.000-04:002008-04-30T22:19:00.000-04:002008-04-30T22:19:00.000-04:00Wow, this is awesome!Noah The Greathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04603792157174161967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-21164558386600502552008-04-30T20:13:00.000-04:002008-04-30T20:13:00.000-04:002008-04-30T20:13:00.000-04:00Pam, I prefer to read the poem/inspiration piece after I have written mine but sometimes I would do the opposite if I couldn't write anythinglissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-14565402324050324982008-04-30T19:08:00.000-04:002008-04-30T19:08:00.000-04:002008-04-30T19:08:00.000-04:00I love the flavor of time you placed in this poem. You drew yourself into Dickinson's time and mirrored the language of the time period. Very lovely.<BR/><BR/>I read the entire Dickinson poem after I wrote mine (didn't want the influence). How about you?Pamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08765105091538770825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-38216409018044636712008-04-30T17:39:00.000-04:002008-04-30T17:39:00.000-04:002008-04-30T17:39:00.000-04:00Beautiful. And, the last stanza really brought it home for me. You even done this one in an allergy haze. Wow! Have a nice night.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-40734187545149345332008-04-30T16:09:00.000-04:002008-04-30T16:09:00.000-04:002008-04-30T16:09:00.000-04:00and you did a great job of carrying on a victorianesque tone... well done lissa....paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8052849586858873458.post-56980337819630168392008-04-30T14:49:00.000-04:002008-04-30T14:49:00.000-04:002008-04-30T14:49:00.000-04:00'sunset in a cup/filled with time's eternal flame' That would be a cup to cherish. Beautiful words.Carole (watermaid)http://watermaid.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com