petals flowing in the sunshine
boundless bliss preserved in the glory of summer
the day slowly falling towards night
catching whatever wonders it could find
until the settling sun gets replace
by the new winds of autumn
One Single Impression: autumn
Autumn
petals flowing in the sunshine
boundless bliss preserved in the glory of summer
the day slowly falling towards night
catching whatever wonders it could find
until the settling sun gets replace
by the new winds of autumn
One Single Impression: autumn
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That moment of catching wonders can be fleeting but glorious. Thanks for sharing this with OSI, Lissa. God bless.
Your image complements your verse very well. I like the idea that the wonders are caught by the seasons as they merge one into the other.
"the new winds of autumn..." Lovely poem.
Living in the Deep South, I look to the onset of autumn with great anticipation. I dearly long for the new winds of autumn!
There is a great deal of anticipation in this. Well expressed.
i am really enjoying all the different perceptions i am able to read on this prompt...
lissa i posted a short story on ...why paisley??? and would love to have your thoughts on it...
The fleeting time is so well written of in this poem. Very lovely.
Hi Lissa, I liked your poem. Autumn takes it toll.
Thank you for your encouragement, I need encouragement to remain among the poetic artists around here.
I'm glad you called my poem today an ode, an ode to Adi. I didn't realize it could be such. I love Robert Burn's odes. I just don't read him often enough (my fault, I'm retired :-)).
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Nice imagery and flow. Lovely.....
love-bd
Such a beautiful response to this wonderful prompt. Well done Lissa. Love the photo too, perfect! G
.."There is a great deal of anticipation in this"_leaf by leaf the album unfolds..beautiful..many thanks..
I like this!! 'by the new winds of autumn' is a special phrase!
I love the way you used the words day falling toward night to describe the shortening days. That is exactly what it feels like.
the fading day is a beautiful metaphor for autumn
Such wonderful imagery for those two lovely leaves.
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