what if love has no hue
perhaps I am meant to be blue
I walk with heavy shoes
my feet striking the ground
silently, plainly
down the path of destiny
behind me only the glow of the moon
I seek no one and no one seeks me
in this desolated place
I continued alone
with no rules and no directions
no one to keep me from falling
perhaps I belong to no one
Cafe Writing: Option Two: Pick Three: talk, belong, victory, destiny, plain, strong, rules, dear
I am still an amateur at writing but hopefully I can get better with each new piece. I welcome any critiques or criticism. 
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There are so many great lines in this piece lissa...I really like it.
Oh painful, but lovely piece. I can't help but relate
i can honestly say i have felt these words,, tho never put them together as beautifully as you have here...
"my feet striking the ground
silently, plainly
down the path of destiny
behind me only the glow of the moon"
I like these lines as they hold reflective elements. :) I
i waited for someone
accepted no one
refused every one
excpecting somebody
but there's nobody
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