I'm all gray today, not a color nearby
the day sky dimming towards a black afternoon
somewhere between nowhere and goodbye
a boy hums a tune, a lonely lullaby to chase the sun away
Tuesday Title using the line, "Somewhere Between Nowhere and Goodbye"
Gray
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I really like how you have used the title! Good work.
I wish I could take the boy by his hand and hum with him as he pushes the last rays of sunlight away. You've created such a beautiful image with this title. Nice job. Have a nice day.
I like this. Interesting use of today's title.
-Nicole
I like how you used the dullness of color to evoke a dullness of feeling. You extended the image all the way to the last line.
Cool stuff so far from what I've read. Keep it up.
Just reading a few entries made me get out my notebook and pen.
You are an inspiration.
i could see this one lissa,, very well done!!1
A unique and beautiful way to express the prompt.
i love the musicality of this. the tone and feeling really captured me.
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“The soul becomes dyed with the color of its thoughts.”
Marcus Aurelius (Roman emperor, best known for his Meditations on Stoic philosophy, AD 121-180)