stung by the splendor of sudden black
cognizance rush through my veins
a million locked spaces of night splits open
heartache has enter
in darkness I hunt for luminous flux
Tuesday Title: Stung By The Splendor of Sudden Black
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4 Comments:
Lissa, this is an excellent response for the Tuesday Title. I absolutely love the third and final lines of your poem. I think everyone visits a black place sometime in their life but, I like to think its their personal strength that carries them back out safely that matters most. Then they can reflect on what they've learned. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.
Excellent work!
I love the line, "million locked spaces of night splits open". I will reflect on this line for the rest of the afternoon.
This sends the visual senses into overdrive. Wonderful imagery. Thank you for entering this into my Poetry Prompt.
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