her shoes
shaded in bright sunlight
stands just a few inches away
across the platform
silent in her movement
yellow warmth
replaces the cold concrete
each step
momentarily brightens her path
One Single Impression
Yellow
her shoes
shaded in bright sunlight
stands just a few inches away
across the platform
silent in her movement
yellow warmth
replaces the cold concrete
each step
momentarily brightens her path
One Single Impression
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I love the Thurber quote under your header! Late is always better than never, and I couldn’t resist looking when I came upon the email follow-up just now while clearing out my Inbox. Love the concept of YELLOW SHOES as warmth on the cold concrete … brightening her path ;--)
I did this prompt on each of my blogs
here at Small Reflections
and here at Sacred Ruminations.
Hugs and blessings,
Lissa,
I like this very much. It make me think of how we express ourselves in everything right down to our shoes.
Writing in Faith: Poems
This is a great poem. The image of her stepping in those yellow shoes and illuminating her path is wonderful.
this is wonderful. the words and image work so well together!
you could not have written more perfect words for this photo...
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