Fingerprints on my lips

I re-dream your face
lights flickering among brown skin
eyes swallow in shadows
a kiss of static bliss
fingerprints on my lips


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anthonynorth said...

An intriguing little piece there. Excellent.

Jill said...

A touch can be as sensual as a kiss...

Michelle Johnson said...

I love the first, third and last lines best. For someone who can't seem to write anything sure did a nice job putting this together. I could only wish for something this good when I don't feel I put something worthy to the page. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day.

Noah the Great said...

Lovely!

artpredator said...

a kiss..static bliss

love the sound of that!

paisley said...

that line.. fingerprints on my lips!!! OMG lissa... i might have to steal that and build on it... i love it!!!!!!!!

gautami tripathy said...

Excellent play of words! You never disappoint.

sleeplessnes

Pam said...

"eyes swallow in shadows" Really nice and makes me stop, think, and picture.

one more believer said...

hello lissa, it is a beautiful story of love that plays so well.. hope you are doing well, havent seen you much lately... well, i havent actually ever seen you, but have missed yr posts.... takecare...

Angelica said...

creative and lovely. it really brings a picture to mind.

qualcosa di bello said...

somehow i find myself thinking about one of your light photos as matched to this...'a kiss of static bliss' is an electric line

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