love falters
on the edge
a smack on the lips
a kiss of no reprieve
Mad Kane's Poetry Prompt: Dating
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5 Comments:
I like that. Thanks for participating in my latest poetry prompt.
I love "smack on the lips" it had that feel of being pushed off the edge.
I enjoyed this!
i am taking this literally as i know that a smack on the lips is a kiss from which there is no reprieve...... very nice lissa....
A reprieve would be a real letdown at that point!
A short poem with a lot of depth and feeling. Very nice.
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