walking down your street
slow dreaming in the waking world
I see only your broad back
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hunched over reading a thick book
you sighed and yawned and then took a look
down to where I spied
then make a cried
hey you! get off the fence, you crook!
For Limerick and Haiku Prompt
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Your haiku paints a nice picture! Thanks for participating in my "walking" prompt.
These are great! Really!
Nifty!
that haiku is particularly visual....
i have the perfect photo for the 'ku of my husband & son walking ahead of my in the city a few weeks ago! isn't it cool how words are so vivid like that!
slowly dreaming in the waking world... that was a beauty of a line...
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