did time move and spill
even when I am standing utterly still
should I kick and curse
make a sigh and a verse
is this life or is it another drill?
For Mad Kane's Limerick and Haiku Prompt
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did time move and spill
even when I am standing utterly still
should I kick and curse
make a sigh and a verse
is this life or is it another drill?
For Mad Kane's Limerick and Haiku Prompt
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"should I kick and curse
make a sigh and a verse"
I like to do all of the above. :)
Thanks for joining in on another of my prompts!
Entertaining!
well this reiterates one of my eternal questions "is this all some kind of a game???"
very nicely done..
yup..
i think the way paisley thinks, and this is a question with so many different answers..
i am quite fond of this limerick, you took the comedy out of it and replaced it with meaningful words and i really liked that quite a bit
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