Time

did time move and spill
even when I am standing utterly still
should I kick and curse
make a sigh and a verse
is this life or is it another drill?


For Mad Kane's Limerick and Haiku Prompt

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Mad Kane said...

"should I kick and curse
make a sigh and a verse"

I like to do all of the above. :)

Thanks for joining in on another of my prompts!

noahthegreat said...

Entertaining!

paisley said...

well this reiterates one of my eternal questions "is this all some kind of a game???"

very nicely done..

Scott said...

yup..
i think the way paisley thinks, and this is a question with so many different answers..

i am quite fond of this limerick, you took the comedy out of it and replaced it with meaningful words and i really liked that quite a bit

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