Inked Lyrics

bottle on sand
click on image for larger view


rings of tears cover
letters smeared in abstract blue hue
your love can still be trace

in your inked lyrics
a parting gift from your heart
from across the ocean



For One Deep Breath and Message in a Bottle

13 Comments:

UL said...

oh beautiful lissa, beautiful

spacedlaw said...

Lovely pieces.

Linda said...

Simply beautiful!

tumblewords said...

Oh, the images! Very nice!

Sandy Carlson said...

Stunning! I feel a little lonely reading it....Gripping.
Writing in Faith: Poems

paisley said...

every time i come here your blog has changed!!! this is a lovely set up... and i am in love with your hiaga!!!! something new and delicious from you!!!! loved it....

Andrée said...

Your poem is so poignant and sad. The artwork with it is wonderful. Our submission can be found here. Thank you for visiting.

Wavy said...

Your message bottle is now afloat in the vast blogosphere ocean. You are Message In a Bottle #75.
Feel free to toss in a bottle whenever you feel the urge to send a message. The blocean is always open.

Message In A Bottle #75

Wavy said...

I love your message bottle. It's really lovely.

Akelamalu said...

Lovely words!

qualcosa di bello said...

tear-stained ink is a powerful take on this prompt!

jem said...

The first one is especially beautiful - the line 'letters smeared in abstract blue' reads so well, I want to keep saying it.

AnnieElf said...

perfect.