This entry is for January Project at Cafe Writing for Option Two: Pick Three from these words: breathless, change, elusive, pensive, reflect, surge, tide, vibrant.
breathless, she runs to nowhere
elusive, she loses her only true love
pensive, she thinks of yesterday
nowhere, she sees herself
love, she doesn't have anymore
herself, she wonders if she can move on
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3 Comments:
poignant, this sad tale of love carried away by the tide...
i really like that line break and style lissa,, i think i will try it myself......
very nice.....
"reflects"
The words are used powerfully and the style is appealing!
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