This entry is for Monday Mural at Poefusion.
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in the ravine of sleep
oceans of eyes dripping tears
down a deserted beach
she walks alone
drench in earth's water
but she takes delight in the cloudburst
a moment of peace
suddenly disappears
into the darkness of a car
it rolls over onto its tummy
crashing into a coconut tree
she slips out in a haze
in the open darkness
she calls to him, "where are you?"
its reply - a fading echo
she turns to see him still inside the dark hood
his eyes spilling over with pain
she reach out her hands to him
for a moment she holds his hand in hers
darkness enfolds her eyes
she can hear herself screaming his name into the night
she opens her eyes to the lights
of the sun filtering through the shade
alone, she falls back to bed
she turns to the empty space beside her
spreads her fingers on the cold sheets, feeling no presence
and knew he was really gone
In the ravine of sleep
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What a powerful write, Lissa! This sent chills up/ down my body when I read it. How tragic and sad at the same time. Thank you for sharing this with us. Hope your New Year's Eve is going well.
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Your poem was really deep with emotion. Keep up the good work.
I was surprised to find out she was dreaming about a traumatic event.
To me the strongest part of the poem is the beginning. The image of oceans of eyes dripping tears is amazing.
wow, powerful is a perfect word...the descriptive words and the flow...
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