Edward

This week's words are: Initial, Knock, Weather. Read other 3WW here.

The weather was not sunny as the weatherman said it would be. Instead, raindrops kept falling down even as the sun came up. Soon it started to pour heavier and heavier. Edward was almost knocked down as the crowd rushed to the nearest shelter. Edward grunted at them as one by one rushed passed him without any word. He struggled with his umbrella. The thing just refused to open. After much muttering, he finally got it open. Then, just as he was crossing the street, it stopped raining.

Edward paused in the middle of the crosswalk and stared up at the sky as the clouds separated themselves into small clusters. The blueness of the sky sneaks through along with the sun. Edward, in his initial irritation with the weather, muttered to himself and continued to walk at the same time as he tried to close his umbrella.

"Edward, honey, just pull that thing...no, no...that...thing..." Edward's mother tried to help him but brushed her off. Finally he got the umbrella closed and stuff it in his backpack which his mother was carrying for him. She gave him a stern look and took it out, scolding him as she folded the umbrella properly. "That is not the way to treat your umbrella, Edward."

At the school entrance, Edward's mother kneeled down and kissed him on the forehead as she gave him his backpack with the umbrella safely tucked on the side. "Be good," she said, her face soften. Then she walked off. Edward sighed and wonder when he will be old enough to walk to school by himself.

11 Comments:

Shephard said...

My favorite line is: "That is not the way to treat your umbrella, Edward." It made me laugh. :)

~S

tumblewords said...

Cute story with a surprise at the ending. I like the complex interaction between Edward and his umbrella - the inanimate always wins!

paisley said...

and meanwhile his mother is hoping he never is......

very cute....

lissa said...

Umbrellas can be very unfriendly especially in harsh weather. I like to match Edward's mood with the weather. Though he's still a little unhappy even when the weather got better. I hope I did that properly.

Thanks everyone for reading.

UL said...

Oh yeah, Umbrella's can be tricky, esp if it's windy, some of them have a tendency to open bottom -up! And oh boy, I still struggle to get it closed. A nice post. Thanks for sharing.

gautami tripathy said...

A very relatable post! Boys will be boys!

Clare said...

Really sweet! I love how Edward is a kid, but he feels like an old soul, too.
:)

Bone said...

Awww, I agree with the others. Cute story. A day in the life of a child.

Truefaith1963 said...

You caught me out there! I thought he was an adult until his mom appeared - cute. Perhaps he is an adult who still needs attention...
Nice story.

Jujee said...

Edward's a really likeable character : )

The 1st paragraph made me giggle especially the last sentence.

TC said...

I laughed at the getting his umbrella open part. Poor Edward :)

This was cute: I love the kid-like-adult stories.

P.S. Sorry I didn't get to this sooner: I didn't get mine posted until tonight and I typically don't read any other's until I post mine :)

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