This entry is for Writers Island.
I fold myself in little pieces as if invisible
toward the inside I go
unintended for the world
I choose to go back to
the beginning
it's not a exit
but an entrance
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9 Comments:
"I choose to go back to
the beginning
it's not a exit
but an entrance"
I needed to read that today. Thanks!
first off i am thrilled to see that you too have taken the nanowrimo challenge... we will be in this together my dear... and secondly i want to thank you for reminding me that an exit is really just another beginning... very nicely done......
Love this cause I understand.
Rose
xo
There is a lot of complexitiy in such a short piece. Wow. The longer first line. Great use of "I fold"...it caught me. Then the "I choose". Strong.
A strong poem of renewal. The lines and breaks are terrific. And glad I'm not alone in the Nanowrimo scene!
I love the way you said it. Very nice to read and moving.
WOW. This is so wonderfully simple yet so profound. Well done.
You said so much in so few words. I really loved this piece!
Just caught this one on renewal, you've portrayed the circle of life beautifully well. Thanks.
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