This week's words are:
gray
fathom
Memphis
The day is gray with the rain pouring heavily down on the cement ground making the house feel cold and eerie. Those dark clouds in the sky covers the earth, blocking out the sun. Shadows are everywhere. The electricity is not out but Mother had lit some candles and turned out the lights. Last time it had rain this hard, the house shook and was swallowed in darkness. Maybe I'm worrying for nothing. Maybe the sky will clear up soon.
I stand there with Mother looking out the front glass door, as the rain slams against the glass and the window panes, creating strange rattling sounds. I almost jump out of my skin. I cannot see what's out there but the shadows cause the tall trees to form unfamiliar shapes on the ground. A chill fills my body. I shiver in my heavy sweater that Mother had put on me a few minutes ago. I whimper quietly. I cannot fathom what's making me feel this way. Mother closes the door tightly but the outside noise is still pounding in the air.
All of a sudden, thunder splashes down onto the town. The loud sound echoes in my ear. Frighten, I ran up the stairs to the bedroom and hide underneath the sheets. In the darkness, my eyes try to focus but all I can seem through the sheets are shapes and shadows. I hear footsteps coming up the stairs. I hear someone calling my name. "Memphis...Memphis where are you?" It was Mother. Still under the cover, I try to call out to her but couldn't.
The sheets are lift off me. It's Mother. She lifts me up and holds me close. I can feel the warmth of her body, smell the scent of her lavender perfume. "Did the thunder frighten you?" She asked with those bright brown eyes. She talks to me in a baby-like voice. I whimper and lick her face. She laughs and carries me with her down the stairs. "There's nothing to be afraid of. Look, the clouds are gone now. It has stopped raining and Daddy's coming home soon. Don't you worry." She kisses me on the nose and then drops me to the ground. Yes, the rain has stopped and the sky is blue again. Mother blows out the candles. It is still daylight. Mother turns on the television to her favorite weekly show with some black lady who Mother had said is very, very rich. I jump onto Mother's lap and lay my paws on her knees. Mother strokes me with her gentle hands. I close my eyes and starts to dream.
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15 Comments:
I loved this, Lissa. It was so evocative. It made me want to curl up in a ball to keep safe.
Good job. At first I wasn't certain, and then I wondered, and then at the last phrase, I knew... yes, I was right. A good job, telling the story through the eyes of a pet. Dog or cat, though? Hard to know.
Welcome to 3WW.
Thanks, Jaysee for your comments.
I voted for your for your short story - Shadow of the Past - a wonderful read - a childhood memory that's hard to forget
Gay, I intended the character to be a dog but now that I have thought about it - it could be a cat.
Thanks for reading.
This was so sweet -- and I loved the part about how Memphis licks Mother's face -- that's when I knew it had to be a pet. I really liked all your imagery and the feeling you created with the storm, too. Really nice!!
:)
Sorry - somehow the last part of the post was cut off. I just fixed. Thanks
Very nice!
You are so talented!
lissa that was beyond wonderful.. first because i had no idea in the beginning that you were a cat... adn second,, because i want to think my dogs can communicate like that... like they hear me and think of things in response...
i loved it!!!!
Wonderfully evocative. A delight to read.
I've seen many posts written from a puppy's perspective but none as moving as this. Lissa, this is very endearing, especially since you left the identity until the end.
You've won a Rockin' Girl Blogger Award...
Thanks for the wonderful compliments. This was written pretty fast - I'm sure there are grammar mistake but I really like the piece very much.
Thanks for visiting.
How clever this was -- I loved the viewpoint of this story...from a dog's eyes! My dog Ruby reacts just this way to thunder storms, poor thing.
Welcome to 3WW, Lissa. I really enjoyed reading this, from the description of a storm to the Oprah line, which had me literally laughing out loud.
I took Memphis to be a dog, too.
very cute story! i love your take on the word Memphis!
we're getting a little bit of rain, maybe thunder, today - so this put me right in the mood. :)
I liked that you used Memphis for a name: nice switch.
My dog used to be scared to death of storms: I think most are.
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